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 Nicki's Romatic Roleplay #1!

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Nicki445
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PostSubject: Nicki's Romatic Roleplay #1!   Tue Apr 13, 2010 4:45 pm

Same rules apply here then any other roleplay.
Here I'll Start:
I'm New to this school Nicki said to her new friend Meme.
I moved from New York to LA. I miss my BFF So much Her Name was Meme too!
well i have to walk home so ill see yea tomrrow i said as i start walking.
As i walked i say two girl from are school talking about their Boyfriends i was so upset
i had to leave my back in New York. Then i started think of meme my bff back in New York.
a tear fell from my eye. I Started running home and ran to the phone and Called New York to talk to Meme. I Said Meme i miss you you need to come to LA its so much fun i need you ask you parents if you can move here with me please!
Sure she said Be Right Back I said ok and she came back to the phone she said Sorry my parents said.... Yes!! I Got up OMG Really Yup im moving to LA!


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McKenna
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PostSubject: Re: Nicki's Romatic Roleplay #1!   Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:57 pm

Sorry this doesn't have ANYTHING to do with the roleplay, but.

You need quotes, commas, periods, etc.

Its not so easy to understand. Like your story on FF.
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PostSubject: Re: Nicki's Romatic Roleplay #1!   Wed Apr 14, 2010 5:20 pm

Yep, this is not a roleplay, from what I see its not romantic either...
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PostSubject: Re: Nicki's Romatic Roleplay #1!   Thu Apr 15, 2010 6:56 pm

It's not a roleplay, Nicki. And, It makes no sense. Your friend's parents wouldn't just randomly say: "Sure, let's move!" Or something...


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